Lung transplantation is one of important treatment options of pulmonary diseases.
It is indicated for lung diseases which don't cure in spite of maximum medication and surgery.
It would be indicated for several diseases, such as interstitial lung disease, chronic obstructive pulmonary disease, cystic fibrosis, and pulmonary artery hypertension.
Patient who deserve lung transplantation first apply for it and put themselves on waiting list. They often have to wait for a few years till they receive transplantation. Some patients pass away before they receive it though.
Moreover, if they are able to receive transplantation, they have to take anti-immune drugs all their lives in order to fight the reaction of their own body which try to eliminate donor's lung cells.
If such reactions are too strong to stand, they sometimes killed.
As you see it, lung transplantation is a harsh treatment.
(Grammarlyに文法直してもらった結果↓)
Lung transplantation is one of the important treatment options for pulmonary diseases.
It is indicated for lung diseases that don't cure despite maximum medication and surgery.
It would be indicated for several diseases, such as interstitial lung disease, chronic obstructive pulmonary disease, cystic fibrosis, and pulmonary artery hypertension.
Patients who deserve lung transplantation first apply for it and put themselves on the waiting list. They often have to wait for a few years till they receive transplantation. Some patients pass away before they receive it though.
Moreover, if they can receive transplantation, they have to take anti-immune drugs all their lives to fight the reaction of their own body which try to eliminate the donor's lung cells.
If such reactions are too strong to stand, they are sometimes killed.
As you see it, lung transplantation is a harsh treatment.
かなりいい感じになるやん（笑）
（Grammarly Goでリライトしてもらった結果↓）
Lung transplantation is a vital treatment option for pulmonary diseases that fail to respond to conventional medication and surgery. It is recommended for a range of conditions, including interstitial lung disease, chronic obstructive pulmonary disease, cystic fibrosis, and pulmonary artery hypertension. Patients who require lung transplantation must first apply for it and join a waiting list, which can take several years. Sadly, some patients pass away before they can receive a transplant. Those who do receive a transplant must take anti-immune drugs for life to prevent their body from attacking the donor's lung cells. However, if the body's reaction is too severe, it can sometimes result in death.
As you see it, lung transplantation is a harsh and serious treatment.
めちゃめちゃええ表現出てくるやん。笑
(お金かけて、Grammarlyにフレージングとかも直してもらった結果↓)
Lung transplantation is one of the critical treatment options for pulmonary diseases.
It is indicated for lung diseases that don't cure despite maximum medication and surgery.
It would be indicated for several diseases, such as interstitial lung disease, chronic obstructive pulmonary disease, cystic fibrosis, and pulmonary artery hypertension.
Patients who deserve lung transplantation first apply for it and put themselves on the waiting list. They often have to wait for a few years till they receive transplantation. Some patients pass away before they receive it, though.
Moreover, if they can receive transplantation, they must take anti-immune drugs all their lives to fight their body's reaction, which tries to eliminate the donor's lung cells.
If such reactions are too strong to stand, they are sometimes killed.
As you see it, lung transplantation is a harsh treatment.
important→essential / critical / vitalに直せと出てきた。
Lung transplantation is one of the critical treatment options for pulmonary diseases.
It is indicated for lung diseases that don't cure despite maximum medication and surgery.
It would be indicated for several diseases, such as interstitial lung disease, chronic obstructive pulmonary disease, cystic fibrosis, and pulmonary artery hypertension.
Patients who deserve lung transplantation first apply for it and put themselves on the waiting list. They often have to wait for a few years till they receive transplantation. Some patients pass away before they receive it, though.
Moreover, if they can receive transplantation, they must take anti-immune drugs all their lives to fight their body's reaction, which tries to eliminate the donor's lung cells.
If such reactions are too strong to stand, they are sometimes killed.
Nonetheless, lung transplantation have been saving a lot of lives all over the world.
It can be the only hope for patients with difficult lung diseases.
↑ちょっと直してみたので、さらにGrammarlyで添削する。
すると、こうなった↓
Lung transplantation is one of the critical treatment options for pulmonary diseases.
It is indicated for lung diseases that don't cure despite maximum medication and surgery.
It would be indicated for several diseases, such as interstitial lung disease, chronic obstructive pulmonary disease, cystic fibrosis, and pulmonary artery hypertension.
Patients who deserve lung transplantation first apply for it and put themselves on the waiting list. They often have to wait for a few years till they receive transplantation. Some patients pass away before they receive it, though.
Moreover, if they can receive transplantation, they must take anti-immune drugs all their lives to fight their body's reaction, which tries to eliminate the donor's lung cells.
If such reactions are too strong to stand, they are sometimes killed.
Nonetheless, lung transplantation has been saving a lot of lives all over the world.
It can be the only hope for patients with complex lung diseases.
ちょっと自分で直した。↓
Lung transplantation is one of the critical treatment options for pulmonary diseases.
It is indicated for lung diseases that don't cure despite maximum medication and surgery.
It would be indicated for several diseases, such as interstitial lung disease, chronic obstructive pulmonary disease, cystic fibrosis, and pulmonary artery hypertension.
Patients who require lung transplantation first apply for it and put themselves on the waiting list. They often have to wait for a few years till they receive transplantation. Sadly, some patients pass away before they receive it, though.
Moreover, if they can receive transplantation, they must take anti-immune drugs all their lives to fight their body's reaction, which tries to eliminate the donor's lung cells.
If such reactions are too strong to stand, they are sometimes killed.
Nonetheless, lung transplantation has been saving a lot of lives all over the world.
It can be the only hope for patients with complex lung diseases.
肺移植は肺疾患に対する重要な治療法の一つです。
最大限の薬物療法や手術を行っても治癒しない肺疾患に適応されます。
間質性肺疾患、慢性閉塞性肺疾患、嚢胞性線維症、肺動脈性肺高血圧症などいくつかの疾患に適応となります。
肺移植を必要とする患者は、まず移植を申請し、待機リストに載せます。移植を受けるまで数年待たなければならないことも多いです。悲しいことに、移植を受ける前に亡くなってしまう患者もいます。
さらに、移植を受けることができたとしても、ドナーの肺細胞を排除しようとする体の反応と闘うために、抗免疫薬を一生飲み続けなければなりません。
このような反応が強すぎて耐えられない場合は、命を落とすこともあります。
それでも、肺移植は世界中で多くの命を救ってきました。
肺移植は、複雑な肺疾患を持つ患者にとって唯一の希望となりうるのです。
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